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All Deviations
All Deviations


A bird and her feather fall under the
intense flow of the stars and
together they fly-
side by side, plunging into the darkness-that-never-seems-to-end.

Though, they're only a mile below the surface, already,
no words in between, and
together they sigh-
a raven's tears or a feather's flight. Perhaps both.

The flame that resides in this bird's eye can consume,
and steal away the soul that feather never seemed to have, and
together they lie-
to one another and to themselves.

Free-fallers through this sky that never knew such
pain and confusion, so
together they cry,
in the absence of one another, not truly away.

That feather would steal that bird's heart,
a beautiful pain in the loss of perfection, then
together, they die,
fly and fall no more.

These two loves of the free-falling moment,
they are no longer the bird and the feather,
but the bird is now, again, just the bird,
and the feather, he is again, just the feather.
©2008 =PimpinRose
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and

together, they once loved enough to be together.

and

alone, she weeps.

and

that feather reassures her that he will marry her, some day.
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~tuicheei:icontuicheei: May 8, 2008, 11:29:38 AM
Strange how this poem seems to speak directly to my torn soul.

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=flyinghamsterofdoom:iconflyinghamsterofdoom: May 8, 2008, 4:57:44 PM
This is incredible.

and

One day, all will be true.

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=PimpinRose:iconPimpinRose: May 8, 2008, 10:29:15 PM
You'll be okay, Amber.

I know you will. You might not believe me, right now, but you're the strongest person I have ever known.

Helen Keller once said that "Life is either a daring adventure or nothing."

This is your adventure, Am. I love you.

I'm here for you, feel free to get ahold of me in whichever way you can.

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I am beautiful for the one who loves me.
=BrigetteMora:iconBrigetteMora: May 8, 2008, 11:36:21 PM
Words fail me.

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Ná glac pioc comhairle gan comhairle ban.
=PimpinRose:iconPimpinRose: May 9, 2008, 12:08:05 AM
You know, in a way, you helped a lot with this one.

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I am beautiful for the one who loves me.
=BrigetteMora:iconBrigetteMora: May 9, 2008, 12:09:16 AM
I did? >.> ..... <.< No one ever told you my totem, did they?

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Ná glac pioc comhairle gan comhairle ban.
=PimpinRose:iconPimpinRose: May 9, 2008, 12:15:27 AM
You talking to me about what I could do to get some ideas helped, I'm still planning on trying that haiku thing.

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I am beautiful for the one who loves me.
=BrigetteMora:iconBrigetteMora: May 9, 2008, 5:16:36 PM
Oh that end, yes, I'm glad it helped.

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Ná glac pioc comhairle gan comhairle ban.
~TheFordness:iconTheFordness: May 10, 2008, 7:13:41 PM
inspirational!

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